Tuesday, April 5, 2011

Night

The world is blurred,
Standing confused,
Faced with uncertainties,
Rather amused.

Feeling unsure,
What's bad and what's good?
Amidst midnight,
Long had I stood.

Contemplations, ruminations,
In the calm of night.
Blinded by the darkness,
Soon lost my sight.

Sat alone, ruffled,
Clueless 'n fuddled.
Usual insomnia,
Wish I got amnesia.

Burdened by guilt,
Oppressed by gloom.
When all of a sudden,
It entered the room.

Reminiscence,
Brought me back to life.
Obscure images,
Flashing through my mind.

Things I had forgotten.
Some that made me melt.
Those that never existed,
Or so I felt.

Retraced my steps,
In my mind's eye.
Until, exhausted,
On the floor I lie.

Wake up to a morning,
Sunny and bright.
Dazzled by the rays,
Recover my sight.
posted by mohit at 10:36 PM

7 comments:

  1. Siddharth SuranaApril 17, 2011 at 12:11 PM

    n1. some lines, especially. but don't change what you want to say just to make it rhyme :P

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  2. mohitApril 18, 2011 at 11:28 AM

    thank you so much bhaiya. :)
    hahaha :P

    chk out the second last para! ;)

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  3. m.sanioritaMay 25, 2011 at 9:46 AM

    hey dis is cool i wish i cud rite 1 lik dis :)

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  4. mohitMay 25, 2011 at 10:25 PM

    thanks :)

    just make a start..
    the rest will flow out of you automatically. :)

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  5. m.sanioritaMay 28, 2011 at 12:45 PM

    hmm k :)

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  6. Rambling RamanJune 14, 2011 at 9:31 AM

    I'm catching a tune for this,somewhere in the back on my head. Good stuff :D

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  7. mohitJune 15, 2011 at 10:17 PM

    Nice to hear that!
    thank you btw :)

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